Mr. Nice Guy

I was challenge by my buddy Kudos to write a multi which is a rhyme scheme where you rhyme multiple syllables repeatedly in the bars. I tried my best but there is definitely no flow for it right now. I will pick this back up again in future and try to make it rap-able.

Hi there Mr. Nice Guy
I heard your dream is to get televised and diversify
Revise how you classify
what you feel inside with diligence
Every effort you apply suffice and disqualify
all the doubts that occupy your confidence
You spend your days wrapping your head around raps with intelligence
Keep trying with endurance
till it becomes a concise paradise to edify and glorify
Masterpieces that testify qualifies
you access to be a certified legendary alumni.

A little story about you and I
I spy on you like an agent of the FBI
My My My
My minds full of landmine
Is my current favourite lullaby on Spotify
Enticing vape flavours from your device splice through my alveoli
When you beat me at pool I yell out Sohai
And your reply is Chou Cibai.

You like your food with lots of spice on your rice and serai
with your stir fry
Preferring chicken wings over thighs
You would like get yourself around some spicy Thai and Indian Chai
Thrice a week is not enough to justify
your cries for laksa raksasa supply
Terpaksa tunggu-menunggu untuk setiap hari Selasa
Tibanya masa untuk rasa kuah yang sedap ditelan penuh dengan jasa.

You give advice and identify
with your friends that are wise Geminis
You celebrate from May till July
You get out of your vices and detoxify yourself from the mice and lice of the lies of the social media pigsty
Releasing magpies tied to butterflies heisting these fears as they fly to the sky
Holding on to compromise as you solidify your goodbye.
Poltergeists that horrify and terrify
Get you tongue tied in demise in the blink of an eye
You pry them open and try to deny them
Throw the dice in a gamble to defy them
Till they die in your memories mummified.

You look people in the eyes
Ignoring their smile wry and dry
Recognise not to buy into them
You do not comply but
Slice through their plies of lies like a samurai
Pacify the cries of the gentrified
Lose their disguise, rectify
and purify their sins like bleaching out the dyes that falsify
the colours of reality.

You became every girls favourite alibi
You never sigh or ask why for an appearance
Like Mordechai who sacrificed to clarify, verify and notify
Beautify our perspectives by giving assurance.

On ice our thoughts amplify, magnify and intensify
Till we revise ourselves to simplify and demystify our anxiety
Modify our dreams as we come down from the highYou try to prophesy with your words like Malachi
A stimuli causing us to hypothesy the worth of life.

Kudos is to recognise
and dignify with significant evidence
Quantify by praise for perseverance
Like our parents' persistence
Our mothers' elegance
Our fathers relevance
An effort to unify and let it multiply.

Hey there Mr. Nice Guy.

- Swit Marie
0155H 31st July 2018
Taman Bahagia


Swit Marie is a 'Jacqueline of all trades' who loves wearing plaid
When words fail, she allows movement and emotion to carry her through
A believer in making dreams come true, she would love to collaborate with you
An explorer starting fresh and would only give her best
She stands in the gap and will only call it quits when it's a wrap.

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